Re: Deadly Thirst
> OOC-
> This is my first post, how is it, any pointers?!?
OOC- Great!
Realy nice!
However, usually you follow on from when someone puts tag at the
bottom of a post.
No worries though because it was an excellent post.
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Who: Phil, Jay, Amber, Rufus
Where: Acme Land
When: After the snippette
---- snip ----
"You no...but Bender might....We have to get out of hear soon...I can
feel my IQ dropiing and I'm starting to have major images in my head
about doughnuts....hmmmmmmmmm doughnuts........"
"Phil, ya dribbling..."
---- end snip ----
Amber and Rufus giggled, they knew this place inside out, rather
usefull when you were trying to catch a mad hologram.
"Hey Dad!" Rufus said.
"Hey Jay!" Said Amber. Phil and Jay both lept a few feet in the air
and went through the ceiling, before landing with a crash in a nearby
house. The twins burst out laughing, the creep up on someone trick
was their favorite in this AR game. Amber was one of the powerpuff
girls and Rufus was Marvin the martian from loony toons.
"We better check to see if they are ok." Rufus said through giggles.
"This is toon land remember? Let them come to us, we have to look for
Cannon!" Amber said, being her usuall confident self.
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