Re: The Revealing Ceremony

ok i'm sorry for the annoying ending to my last post so i decided to
change things. i couldn't think of an ending before and the whole
necklace thing is just.....well i'll leave it at i changed it.
> ''What leave? Are you kidding? That was so cool! The way you
handled
> that guy, it was incredible! That's the most exciting thing that's
> ever happened to me.''
> ''Really?''
> ''Yeah, I spend all day sat at a computer and all night either in
my
> room watching videos or at the bar drinking, And believe me it's
nice
> to have an exciting night for a change. Hey, can you do it again?''
> ''I don't think I really want to, not for a while anyway.''
> ''okay, let's go back to my place and have a drink,''
> The two of them went to leave, but not without Emma kicking the
other
> drunk in the groin, after all she wanted her fun too. So the two
left
> the drunks wriggling on the floor.
>
> Emma woke up on her bunk in a daze. She had gotten really drunk
that
> night, and while trying to get her memories back she gave out a
> groan.''Uggh, what happened last night?''
> Her room was a mess, infact even messier than usual. The biggest
> change was the cloaked figure, lying on the small metal table in
the
> middle of the room. It was Kevin and he was still asleep. Emma
jumped
> down from her bunk and began tidying up a little. She turned to the
snoring figure lay on the table. The snoring hurt her head because of
her large hangover. She tried to think hard of the night before. She
thought. There was dancing to music, drinking games of course and oh
no..karaoke. She slaped her hand on her forhead. She couldn't believe
she had actually sung infront of him. Then she thought some
more, 'what happened next?,' she thought, 'oh no...we didn't....did
we?'She looked over at kevin who was beginning to wake up from his
dreams of warning people of the inevitable doom that would come upon
them. ''Whoa, what happened last night?''
''I don't know, what?''
ok i'm sorry i can't seem to make the story exciting and i'm sorry if
this isn't very good but what the hell i'll carry on if i can.