revised post!

hopefully THIS will fix it!
 
Who:- Pilots
Where:- Out in the battle
 
“Wave two have joined the fight commander!” Came Efof’s voice over Jays’ comm., it was actually Rio Lomaz but as Jay was currently occupying her Efof would have to do. “Roger that” Chrysler replied “Jesus how many of them are there?!” He said glancing from the viewport to the console and back again “We got a job on here”
The Phoenix barrel rolled between three of the Hymentoptera fighters, dropping proximity mines behind which detonated, the force of the explosion while not damaging the ships,  sent a shockwave into them, knocking them off course into a group of smaller ships, taking 6 ships out of commission. Jay looped, and flew back, gatling guns spinning riddling a nearby ship with holes, tearing trough its skin like hull like paper.
A single shot came across his bow, skimming the hull, and impacted with the sensor pallet. “Oh..yippie…now I’m sensor blind..” he muttered, He was even less than impressed when he saw when the shot had come from. A red starbug, with the soviet flag painted on the side. In the cockpit he could just make out the faces of Dr Keto and Dr Cerebrum. “WHAT THE SMEG ARE YOU TWO DOING OUT HERE?” he screamed into the comm’s unit, but it was no good, their bullet had knocked out outbound communication. The starbug was on a collision course heading toward the Blue Dwarf at top speed, Even if Jay COULD have warned the dwarf, there would have been no way it could move out of the way in time, that and all the people qualified to do that were currently being shot at by alien craft. 
He throttled up to top speed toward the ship, away from the battle ignoring incoming communications from Dean. Flying over the top of Cerebrum’s shuttle he released a tow line, and pulled the doctors off course from their undesired target.
“VE haff been snared!” came Cerebrums voice in a mock german accent “By von off ein allies!” Keto’s voice was heard, “Moron” he said “you were about to plough headlong into ANOTHER friendly craft! You would have killed me!” Obviously Ketos concerns were more for his own safety than that of anyone else. Jay shook his head, released the tow line and headed back into the fight, fortunately by this point the Phoenixes’ on-board computer had managed to get most of the sensors and communications back online. “I’m not even gonna ask what you’re doing out here Doctor Dumbass, but at least fire at the right people!”
He said, as Cerebrum stalled the engine of the ‘bug and got it stuck in 5th gear.
 
  
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