Honey, i've lost my mind

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"Your*small pause to add emphazis*....sleeping*stepping forward another step*....on*small pause*....the*grinning*....couch*full out enthusiasm*.....forever!"
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Jay smirked. What the hell was she on. "Lady, you're crazy" he said bluntly.
Alota was fuming. Jay dissapears then shows up helping the pirates, THEN he INSULTS her.
"We have been married six months and not once have you dared talk to me like that, what makes you think you can get away with it now?" 
"Because I'm NOT YOUR F***ING HUSBAND!" Jay yelled,
he aimed his gun at her head. "Now are you gonna give me everything you got woth any money?..or do I have to shoot?"
"Whats happened to you Jay?" she said, wiping a single tear from her cheek. 
"You should worry less about what happened to me and worry more about whats gonna happen to you"
Alota stared him in the eyes. He was so cold, so uncaring. Not Jay at all, there was no trace of her husband staring back at her.
"You...you..." she started, Jay lowered his gun, confused, why was she insisting she knew her?
She placed her hands on either side of his face, "You don't remember do you?" she said, "You really don't remember me?"  Finding it more difficult to fight back the tears that were rolling down her face.
Jay stepped back, lowering his gun, and stared back, "Come on Jay..." Alota continued "Remember..REMEMBER!"
He stood silent, staring back.
A voice came from the upper level of the promenade "Chrysler!" it was Needles. "C'mon man..we got plunderin to do!"
He looked back at Alota.
"Nice try" he said "you almost had me convinced"
He spund around and ran to join his cohorts, leaving Alota standing in the corridor. bewildered and heartbroken. 
 
 
 
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