this is getting to be too much of a hobit

Who:- Tara, amber, rufus, Vanessa, Tree, Jay, Wildflower, Trisees,
Cerebrum, Hazel..oh and Dr. ' I like the feel of a satin thong' Keto.
Where:- bug
"c'mon doc, tell us what's down there!" Vanessa said for the third
time.
"Ms Chrysler, there is a handy airlock just 4 feet away from
here...if you persist to pester me I will ensure that you are swifly
deposited through it!"
"You're gonna find out soon enough sis...were nearly there" Jay
commented from the pilots seat.
"Ok..initait.....Woah."
"Woah?" trisees asked..."Why woah?"
"We got a MAJOR pressure build up in the starboard fuel tank..Im'
gonna have to..."
Befor ehe could finish what he was going to sya the entire shuttle
was rocked by the sound of an explosion..the twins cries filled the
ship.
"WE'VE LOST THRUSTERS!" Jay announced.."I've lost control of the
shuttle....were gonna crash..EVERYBODY TO THE BACK! NOW!...except you
Keto come sit on th dashboard..."
everyone ran to the back of the shuttle, while Jay fought to bring
the shuttle upright. the 'bug plummettted towards the planet, trees
snapping like twigs as the starbug made contact, Jay was thrown out
of his seat against the plexi-glass and down to the floor. the 'bug
eventually came to a halt, embedded in mounds of earth.
The cockpit was ablaze.
Jay blacked out.
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