die you B*****D

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"Really sherlock?!" Jay yelled "What was your first clue your powers ofdeduction are...."he was cut off by a beast how dived at him, sending him and the creatureinto the lake, jay tried to fight, but the moster was pulling him to thebottom by his backpack.
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Alota saw Jay being pulled down to the bottom of the lake by a big hairy thing.
"That's it!" she shouted "Nobody kills this crew!" she paused then said in a quieter voice "Except maybe Harris when he's been on the piss and is very stressed". She reloaded her rifle and set off after the big hairy thing that had Jay. She dived under water found Jay sergically removed the things paws off of Jay's backpack then reserviced fireing into the water
"Die you basterd!" she shouted as she fired shot after shot. No matter how many times she shot what ever it was it kept coming back. She pushed Jay away as she was dragged under water. Under  water her vision was not that good because it wasn't exactly the most nicest and cleanest but she eventually got to grips that she was about to experiance a slow and painfull death if she didn't get her arse in gear. The creature clawed at her leg causing a rather deep wound down her thigh and continuing below her knee cap. 
"Fuck this" she said below the water. She pulled out her combat knife and hacked the thing to death. She rose to the surface lungs burning for air. She started swimming back to the surface with Jay in tow. She limped up to the surface and started nuking the buggers that where there still attacking her comrads.
"Keep attacking, don't let them win" WhiteWolf shouted, everyone let out a war cry and eventually the hairy beast's dropped to the floor dead (I hope). Alota collapsed to the floor exhausted,
"Holy hell that was certainly different, no matter how many times I shot that thing it still came back for more. talk about suicidel psyhcotic maniacs" she said.
 
<<Sorry if it's over the top cared to continue anyone>>