Re: Forgive me Captain........
Posted byPosted: Nov 3, 2008, 9:23am
Sorry mate, but theres a plan for the whole Jay / Evil Jay part.
Deal with the invading aliens and the alternate Jay's being abducted
by all means, but don't give a reason for their capture and don't do
anything with Jay or Evil Jay for now.
And to be honest, I don't quite follow what's happened in the post.
This would make it difficult to respond to. Feel free to email me if
you have ideas for the plot, but please don't take the main plot in
your own direction without first clearing with the people running
it.
--- In JMC_Blue_Dwarf@yahoogroups.com, "halvoc" <Kraiken@...> wrote:
>
> Who: Captain Jay, Y-19's, Evil Jay
> Where: Captains Quarters
> When: After Evil Jays ship came through!
>
> Jay sat with his hands on his forehead groaning, Evil Jay was back
> and had taken all of "Him" captive. What was he going to do now,
the
> ships systems were being weird enough as it was half the time
telling
> him that he did not have clearance to do anything anymore plus
Holly
> was being unusually strict. The Tech guys were working on it but
it
> still seemed hopeless.
> A hand suddenly clasped down on the back of his head, "What the
> Smeg!" he yelled trying to stand.....but he couldn't his whole
body
> would not move as if an iron grip was placed over every inch of
his
> flesh.
> "Forgive me Captain," said an emotionless voice from behind him.
> "Who the Smeg are you I am a Captain!!! I'll have you strung up by
> your balls for this!!!!!!!!!" he yelled furiously trying in vain
to
> turn his head.
> The hand removed its self but he could still not move an inch, a
hand
> clasped on the back of his collar and lifted him twisting his body
in
> mid air so that he was now face to face with........himself. The
> other him was dressed in what he assumed was some form of shiny
black
> armour but other than that he was his double ganger.
> "You!" gasped Jay anger welling inside him furious that his limbs
> were now useless, "so what now Jay?" he asked.
> The other Jay looked on blankly at him, "To impersonate you I must
> absorb your memories," with that he placed two fingers on his
temple.
> Jay gasped as in the space of what must have been only thirty
seconds
> his whole life flashed before his eyes. As it ended for the first
> time in years Jay cried seeing everything he had done in his life.
> "What are you going to do with me?" he sobbed all his strength
having
> gone from him.
> The other gave the most minute of smiles ever given to him "Crew
> Dispensable," he chanted removing his fingers from Jay's head and
> flicking him.............then for Jay at least..........there was
> nothing but darkness.
>
>
> Where: The Thorax
> Evil Jay surveyed the Blue Dwarf with contempt in his
> heart "Finally!" he said allowed chuckling slightly. Roughly
thirty
> other Jay's were suspended from the walls by a spider wed like
> solution all out cold though his female counted part was strapped
to
> a chair in the middle of the room a shadowy figure standing over
her.
> "What is your plan for the female?" asked the figure in a dark
> horribly well spoken voice.
> Evil Jay chuckled, "Who better to produce me an air than myself,"
he
> said stroking her face with one gloved hand, "once you've worked
your
> magic my friend."
> "If you keep your end of our agreement Jay ill turn her and Blue
> Dwarf into playboy bunnies for you," the man spoke darkly walking
> into the light.
> "Do not worry Y-19," said Jay looking at the long haired black
eyed
> demon before him garbed in his pure black armour, "I'll get you
what
> you want."
> "See that you do Jay," threatened 19 turning away from the
> man, "don't make me put you back where I found you," he left with
his
> words punching and there y killing a large Hymenoptera as he
walked
> through the door.
>